Friday, July 16, 2010

*The abandonment of newborn babies reflects the collapse of family institution in Malaysia*

In this modernization and globalization era,the abandonment of newborn babies reflects the collapse of family institution.This problem is gradually increasing in Malaysia.One day,I went to the garden near by my house.Suddenly,I heard a sound of baby crying,then I straight away went to find the source of the sound.Finally,I found that a newborn baby was abandoned in the garden.Hence,I totally agree with this statement that the abandonment of newborn babies is due to the collapse of family institution is because of financial problems,lack of religion knowledge and too much of freedom and western influence.
The abandonment of newborn babies is defined as give or deliver newborn babies and dump them without any responsibilities and guilt and the collapse of family is defined as the destruction of an organisation of married couples in living together and raising children according to Eastern values.My first point is why all this happens is due to financial problem in the family.Parents work all day long to earn more money therefore they do not have time to care for their children and neglect their offsprings.Thus,their children seek love and attention from the brother figure.Then,they get involved in an intimate relationship with their lover to the extent od giving birth to unwanted babies.Since they are unable to raise their newborn babies and scared to tell their family so they dump their newborn babies in places like the toilet,garden,car park and dusbin.In brief,money can cause evil.

Morever,lack of religion knowledge is my second point of the abandonment of newborn babies.Religion knowledge is defined as the belief and worship in the existence of a god or gods.Parents,nowadays are busy working to earn more money,because they want to support their child's expenses in the future.However,they do not understand what their child truly needs that is their guidance especially in moral education.Without their guidance,their child can be easily influenced by the 'outside world' because they want to try new things especially sex.Hence,their child will have strong desire to know about sexual intercourse.After that,their child attempts to try sexual intercourse with their lover.Then,the girl will get pregnant upon pre-marital sex and the abandonment of babies or abortion will happen.In short,lack of religion knowledge will cause the abandonment of newborn babies.
Other that than,the third factor of abandonment of newborn babies is too much of freedom and western influence.Freedom is defined as the state of being able to do what you want letting nothing could stop you.While the western influence is defined as the western cultures that affect or change the attitude or thinking perspective of a person.Parents give too much freedom to their child and always leave them at home.Nowadays,their child's mind and soul are unsteady and can be easily influenced by the mass media like internet,radio and VCDs.For instance,immature children are exposed to the western cultures such as mingling around freely between boys or girls,clubbing and others.This is because their parents do not have time to take care and accompany their child.The result of too much of freedom will always bring them go clubbing and meet the bad friends and run away from home.Their friends will always bring them go clubbing and meet the bad friends or even take hallucinogen.After that,the girl will get pregnant after their bad friends have raped them.Therefore,the girls will dump the newborn babies or abort the innocent lives.In summary,too much of freedom and western influence will cause the abandonment of newborn babies.
In conclusion,the abandonment of newborn babies is caused by financial problems,lack of religion knowledge and too much of freedom and western culture.Thus,parents should spend more time accompany their child to the fullest.Sometimes,parents must also guide their children in moral education and play a role model for them to follow.

1 comments:

Lonely_Wolf said...

Overall your essay is ok. Its getting better as time passed

U even uses various type of sequence connectors.
However, There is sequence connector written wrongly. "Other than that", you wrote "Other taht than"... Your only mistake

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